Right, this is it.  I could have stretched this out into two or three more chapters, but I felt that would be unfair.  It doesn't really divide into them anyway, not the way the other parts have, and I just couldn't stop until it was … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 22 -The Finale!

A little bit of backstory here. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   The Dockery Dames were a traditional bunch. Back in their early days they were more of a business than an street-state. Of course, back then they still had pimps to mould them into said business. Originally, there … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 21

We're on the home stretch now, I think... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   'Just go away, please. We both know how this goes.' Lord Pyle was not in the best of moods, thanks largely to Haul's cigar, and had decided that directness was the best way to deal … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 20

Was going to do the second dream, but don't think it's really worthwhile.  Instead I got back on course with OYGYDTOTL.  Part 19, christ!   I wonder how much longer I can keep this going? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Being a drug dealer, Johnson McLeary had a nose … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 19

Not sure I'm happy with this one.  Not fully anyway.  But, this is what happens when you are writing a largely improvised webnovel I suppose, especially when you are anxious to get one final post done before you go off on holiday. Anyway, I hope … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 18

There was a delay.  A frog stole my shoes.  Back now.  Read. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ordinarily, people don't erect a stripy deck chair in the middle of the street, crack open a book and smoke a cigar while sat in the rain, but Haul had decided to … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 17

Hello everyone, I'm finally back.  I did say I was going to have christmas updates, but I never bothered to write them so you didn't get any.  But never mind!  You can have your christmas updates now!  Today's update is over one thousand words long, … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 16

Most likely you will get one more part before christmas day. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- One of the best things about murder scenes, Haul had decided, was that there was very little real work involved for a police officer. That was a lie, of course, but it helped … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 15

A brief trip back to Kenya, chaps. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   'He doesn't mean to be dangerous.' It was a sentence that Kenya found ridiculous. Eldred was a hired killer, he had worked that out quite early on in his surveillance career. For Cassandra to stand there … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 14

We return to our buddy, Eldred Fie.  It's possible I am introducing too many protagonists (Eldred, Haul, Morris, Kenya), but I don't care.  It's my webnovel - ner ner ner. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The day's work done, Eldred was going home. It was rare that there would … Continue reading OYGYDTOTL – Part 13